The Rhetoric of Reputation

I found a website dedicated to the Hubble Telescope. This website has a photo gallery of Hubble's images ranging from galaxies to planets. Here is the link to the gallery.

Hubble Gallery

To be more specific about my audience, I lean not only to a political one, but address leaders themselves to explain what I feel a leader must do in order to be a good one. With the elections closing in, my audience can be expanded to voters as well.

My paper is going to address the question, "What makes good leadership?" My audience will be a political audience.

Winston Berryhill
Austin Ries
Kassandra Gorena

Winston
completely deleted the sentence, "By the essay being read from whomever is interested, it suggests another audience: the gay community itself"(2.1,pg4)
"As put into perspective by journalist Andrew Sullivan, gay culture has actually 'changed' more than it has evolved." was changed to "Over the decades, gay culture has evolved from an 'old' generation to a 'young' generation, as found by journalist Andrew Sullivan" (pg1)

Austin
The biography page also notes that his writings have been published in many major publications such as: National Geographic, Washington Monthly, and the New Republic. I got rid of the colon and replaced it with a period.

I am doing my paper on the death penalty.