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I chose to cut up my rough draft and re-organize it to ease the flow of the paper. I realized, while cutting it up, that the paper was completely out of order and didn't really follow a pattern. It seemed as if I just put all my thoughts down on paper in an unorganized fashion. At first, it was organized based on ideal beauty, then eye imagery, then the characters. What I began to realize, though, was that my paper had the characters and eye imagery throughout the entire paper. So I decided to organize my paper, focusing on the eye imagery and image in the characters, and organized the paper by characters, instead. This helped the flow of my paper greatly.