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After underlining every sentence and cutting up each paragraph my paper looks like a jumbled mess. After doing this revision, I realized I have several contextual issues. The organizational structure is pretty good and I couldn't find a problem there, but the content needs to be filled out a little more. Each paragraph could offer a bit more analysis and transitions. The topic discusses marriage in the 1920s, but the paper doesn't have a main focus about this type of relationship. I guess I need to ask myself whats the point and go from there.