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I did the same revision I used for the midterm paper (the highlighting exercise) because it was effective last time around. This exercise helps me cut out unnecessary and repetitive ideas that do add to the cohesiveness of my paragraphs. One of my biggest problems is rambling on about the same thing for a long time so this helps me trim the rambling. Also, I can see how much analysis I have and in comparison to textual evidence. I feel like I did a thorough job of analyzing the text. I also saw that I need to hammer out my transitions a bit more. This exercise helped me to focus on the areas where I need to do the most work at this point.