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I summarized too much in my paper, and I'm working on adding more analysis to balance it out. I can tell I have a lot of work a head of me, but I also have a good feeling about this paper. All the editing I did, I did on the computer so I could just print out the fresh, readable copy. While cleaner, this makes it more difficult to see exactly where I made changes, but it eliminates all the random scribbles and paragraphs I would have had otherwise.

As per usual, my conclusion is lame. I need to refine and tighten my argument more, so as to write a more definitive concluding paragraph.

Most of the outside sources I wanted to use didn't end up working for me, so I need to find new outside documents to help support my argument. I think my problem there was that I wasn't looking for the right sources. It might benefit me to look up my broader topics - sex, rape, etc - and not just research how those topics fit into the Bluest Eye.