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I found through this exercise that I had enough claims, textual evidence and analysis. What I was lacking was clear topic sentences and ending paragraphs without explaining to the reader where I was going next. I also lacked description of how this related back to my thesis statement and lacked how this related to the paper as a whole. I found that some of my claims were not backed up by textual evidence or any evidence at all. Specifically one whole paragraph had claims and assertions but not textual evidence. I also realized that some of the resources I used might need better placement to fully support my argument.