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In doing the revision exercises, some of the things I noticed in my paper that I will change presented themselves.

One of the aspects of my paper that I need to change is the distinction regarding some of my research. When I talk about the "New Negro" mentality, I seemed to be harshly misrepresenting and unfairly presenting the movement with a tone of failure. I cite that Morrison comments on the products of the movement as an unfavorable outcome. However, I need to add some sort of statement that says that the movement was not entirely bad and clarify as to what Morrison is trying to convey.
Also, I have some awkward statements in the text that might be changed or reordered to make more clear and precise. Additionally, there are typos in the text that definitely need to be changed.
Fortunately, no major changes as far as content and argument structure needs to made, only some definitions and word choices. I think that with these changes my paper will become more precise and flow much more smoothly.