Revisions exercise slash impromptu peer edit

During class I had two different people read and review my paper, and their perspectives really helped me sort out some of the problems I was having with my paper. Also, I tend to ramble and write in a stream of consciousness type way, so it was helpful to see if my jumbled thoughts actually make sense to other people. This exercise also made me realize how much more work I have to do. This week should be chock-full of tragic heroes and Lolly Willows!